Your rendering of the tight-grip consistency and agitation of the mire around the youthful woman's bosom and armpits is outstanding and is augmented so well by your treatment of her hands' clawing furrows and muck-laden desperate reach! Also nicely portrayed that she's been having a prolonged struggle that suddenly is punctuated by the tree branch's sharp crack, dashing all hope for a good outcome (unless these girls become magically well-schooled, right here, in the science of physically removing oneself from suctioning mud and in the art of enjoying being mired). I find the maturity of your distinctive, crystal-clear style and point of view that turn a moment into a timeless story is well underway with this piece!
*pulls down branch to break and make redhead schoolgirl fall splat into the mud, getting her cute uniform and socks and shoes all covered in nice sloppy mud* This is terrific, the details on everything are spectacular, and the girls are very cute! ^_^
great work (^w^) i love the colour that you get on these characters. what could happened? there a a lot of case, but the 1st one is, she take her hand and use the tree to get her out, the 2nd case possible is, she take her hand, but while tracting her friend out, the wood peace break and the 2 girls get trapped in that mud pit (^w^)
Thanks! It's one of the things I wanted to achieve is to make the mud look more than just flat, but be a character in itself and react to the girls. PM2K mentioned to make it look like the girl had clawed in the mud, so that was something to feed on.
What happens is up to me? The branch breaks and the red-head falls in close to the ribbon-haired-girl, then since this is their last moment, one of them reveals their true sexuality before making out with the other, their lips stay locked as they slowly sink to their delicious doom.